Wednesday, April 9, 2008

if i could

if i could see the world
through someone else's eyes
would i see
the sky as being more blue?
the grass as being more green?
smiles as being more true?
would i remember
more sunshine than rain?
more warm breezes than hurricanes?
more hugs than tears?
or would it seem the same?

6 comments:

Utahraptor said...

STOP UPDATING ON A REGULAR BASIS
RAWR

Grey Eyed Girl said...

why? cause i'm kicking your ass at it? i'm gone for a bit, so you've got time to catch up turbo!
xox

Grey Eyed Girl said...

why? cause i'm kicking your ass at it? i'm gone for a bit, so you've got time to catch up turbo!
xox

Soaking up the Sun said...

way to write the same comment twice. loooooser. haha. i like the poem. i think you would see it in different light, but that's not necesariyly a good or bad thing

Shop Girl* said...

I LOVE this one. Just for the record. :)

Utahraptor said...

i totally updated mine now, so HA